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image HIDDEN TALENTS
By Jayne Ann Krentz, 1993
Contemporary Romance
Reprinted 1998, Pocket Books; $6.99 ISBN: 0671019651

Reviewed by: Beverly Kuhn
Reviewed by: Phyllis Brighouse
Reviewed by: Anne Hayes Cleary

Serenity Makepeace just wants to save her community. She runs an eclectic grocery store in Witt's End, Washington, that caters to the artistic, earthy, and unusual inhabitants of her town. In an effort to expand her business and secure the stability of Witt's End, Serenity decides to start a mail-order catalog company featuring the products in her store. However, she knows absolutely nothing about the business world. Caleb Ventress is the start-up expert she hires to help her. The illegitimate heir of the Ventress fortune, Caleb has the characteristics that make him a shark of a businessman: cold, instinctive, shrewd, calculating, and above all . . . hungry! And Serenity is an angelfish in his shark-infested waters.

What starts out to be a fairly straightforward business deal turns into something altogether different. Caleb realizes that Serenity is anything but serene, and his carefully controlled world turns into a chaotic blend of emotions that startle and intrigue him. The mystery behind the blackmail attempts only fuel the fire, and these two find themselves in the middle of a life-threatening situation in remote, secluded, and seemingly innocent Witt's End.

Hidden Talents is vintage Krentz. She weaves an intriguing story that invites you to discover the characters as they discover themselves. The shark in Caleb finds reasons to protect the angelfish in Serenity, while the angelfish in Serenity teaches the shark in Caleb a thing or two about life, love, and moving beyond the past. Not to be missed!

Beverly Kuhn


Serenity Makepeace has a mission to revitalise her home town, and strikes a deal with start-up consultant Caleb Ventress. It turns out they both have mysterious pasts. Both were born out of wedlock and "adopted" – Caleb by his father’s family, and Serenity by the entire town of Witts End. But who is it that knows Caleb’s mother posed in the nude, that Serenity did as well, and that Caleb would run a mile before getting involved with anyone who repeated the sins of his mother? Because someone wants to put a stop to their business deal and growing relationship so badly they’ll blackmail and kill to do it.

Blackmail is a strong theme from page 1, when Serenity tells Caleb she’s being blackmailed. Just as he’s about to entice her into an affair. It was all for Art, and she can’t understand why this drives him to a fury. As they become closer, Serenity realises Caleb is being emotionally blackmailed by his ambitious family after an old scandal involving his mother. Strong emotions swirl as Caleb and Serenity find the answer to their mystery lies buried in the tragic story of his parents’ deaths. When Caleb deserts his family, just like his father, it’s Serenity who brings about the reconciliation.

The story is full of lighthearted moments and wonderful humour. Witts End itself is a gem of a creation. There’s Ambrose - the gifted, alcoholic photographer who took the photos of Serenity, who becomes Body Number One. There’s a bookshop owner who follows an incomprehensible philosophy as he brews Old Hogwash, the world’s finest beer. And there’s Zone, Serenity’s store assistant who dresses and talks like a Hari Krishna follower and whose first name ought to be Twilight. My favourite is Blade, a paranoid survivalist who wanders the woods armed to the teeth guarding against a covert government invasion. He soon gets rid of Caleb’s rival just by being friendly. And we mustn’t forget Webster, whose passion for rocks is so important at the climax of the story. There’s a lot going on here, mostly tightly plotted, as usual, even though I found Zone’s sub-plot more of a "bolt on" than an integral part of the whole.

I have to say, though, that I don’t like the idea of men taking photographs of naked women and calling it Art. We’ve several famous photographers over here in England (men of course) who do just that. Their "collectors’ calendars" are tacky and probably put me off before I opened the book. OK, it’s central to the plot that Serenity was photographed like this. But couldn’t she have said something along the lines that everyone in Witts End was unconventional and posed for Ambrose, and it’s no big deal except she happened to be young and pretty?

But I bicker. JAK writes about the things that she cares for passionately which is what a writer’s "voice" is all about after all. This book has them all: the business and family themes, her ideal man, a clear vision of what will keep the relationship between the hero and heroine rock solid for the rest of their lives, a touch of the paranormal, wonderful dialogue, a wicked sense of humour, a well drawn hero and heroine, solidly drawn family members, and interesting minor characters. It’s a cracking story. Read it.

Phyllis Brighouse


Logical start-up consultant Caleb Ventress's deliberations had finally led to a decision. He would turn his business association with Serenity Makepeace into a social one. But before he can voice his decision, Serenity calmly announces she is being blackmailed over some nude art photographs taken by Ambrose Asterly, one of the unconventional residents of her mountain community, Witt's End. Since his own life had begun in the shadow of blackmail, Caleb's initial reaction is to withdraw from his contract to help Serenity expand her small grocery store into a mail-order catalog. She leaves, but Caleb's attraction to Serenity prevails over his long held revulsion for nude photography and he heads for the mountains and Serenity Makepeace.

Serenity returns to Witt's End disappointed by Caleb's dissolution of their contract and by his reaction to her announcement. On both a professional and personal level she'd liked him and he'd been the perfect consultant to help with her plans to save Witt's End from extinction. She is therefore surprised and pleased by Caleb's arrival although it comes on the heels of Ambrose's seemingly accidental death. She is even more pleased with the manner in which he deals with Witt's End's odd residents and their sometimes bizarre behavior. But as Caleb and Serenity are pressured into investigating the blackmail attempt, they realize that murder and violence have invaded this remote town and somehow Caleb's wealthy family may be involved.

Peopled with delightfully quirky characters, crafted with whimsical plot twists and starring a fascinating hero and heroine, HIDDEN TALENTS is definitely one of Jayne Ann Krentz's most intriguing and entertaining efforts. It's on my keeper shelf and if you enjoy it as much as I did, I'm sure it will be on yours too!

Anne Hayes Cleary


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